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smile6jade · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 15:39

發(fā)到這里應(yīng)該可以吧，謝謝老師，老師辛苦了！期待回復(fù)！

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smile6jade · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 15:40

smile6jade 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 15:39
發(fā)到這里應(yīng)該可以吧，謝謝老師，老師辛苦了！期待回復(fù)！

我的圖片怎么沒(méi)有了……

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逆襲女漢子 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 15:41

怎么傳不了作文啊

逆襲女漢子 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 15:43

上傳不了，只能發(fā)這里了，謝謝老師！英語(yǔ)一

碧落135 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 15:53

之前的沒(méi)拍清楚

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碧落135 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 15:55

碧落135 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 15:53
之前的沒(méi)拍清楚

依舊不真，無(wú)語(yǔ)了

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Infinite168 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 16:02

英語(yǔ)一！～謝謝方老師！～

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Infinite168 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 16:04

未必免看不清～～～再來(lái)一張！～！～老師辛苦！～！～

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smile6jade · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 16:04

剛才傳的圖不清楚，直接手打了！
      As is shown in the first picture , a beautiful girl threw the banana peel on the ground when she passed by a rubbish bin . However , a boy is picking up the peel into the bin in the second picture. There is a sentence below the two pictures that beauty is not in the appearance.
   This two drawings illustrate what is the most beautiful thing is not what you showed outside but what you did. Although, a man or girl is good-looking with beautiful dress , what he or she performances can truly reflect what he thought . For example , some tourists go abroad for traveling with littering at random. Even though they are well-rich with expensive and beautiful clothes, they are not in the truly beauty.
      To be honest , we are surrounded by this kind of person in our lives . It is necessary to improve our awareness of the moral culture and I believe we can got the true beauty in the future.

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大頭大頭大頭鬼 · 發(fā)表于 2014-10-20 16:05

剛剛發(fā)了作文，為什么顯示"不良信息"啊,敲了好久啊。。全沒(méi)了。。。

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