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斑駁的光 · 發表于 2014-10-20 12:58

為什么會無法提交。。。

斑駁的光 · 發表于 2014-10-20 13:09

【作文隨手寫，老師來評分】英語一
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張小囧小朋友 · 發表于 2014-10-20 13:29

As is vividiy described in the picture a lady who has a good appearance is actually not civilized.We can see clearly in the photo that a women is eating bananas.While one is eaten,she throw the garbage behind her on the road,neglecting there is a bin just not far from her.Just a few minutes later,an elder cleaner passes by and pick it up.
This picture reflects a thought-provoking phenomenon in the society.Many people,both men and women,has overlooked the appearance of them and pay little attention on improving the quality of them.It has caused that there were always many bad things occurred everyday.In some extent,the society we lived in was just seemed like harmonious but not real beautiful.A case in point is that Reform and Open up in china has brought great changes in many aspects of our life.Some people who came from country and didn't received good education did business in big city,such as Beijing and Shanghai.The money they earned has became a trip.
In conclusion.Everyone should understand the real beauty is not pretty appearance but the virtue we own.Only natives become more civilized can our society will be better.

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大頭大頭大頭鬼 · 發表于 2014-10-20 13:32

這樣看得清楚嗎？

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張小囧小朋友 · 發表于 2014-10-20 13:33

【隨手寫英語作文老師來評分】英語一。
         As is vividiy described in the picture a lady who has a good appearance is actually not civilized.We can see clearly in the photo that a women is eating bananas.While one is eaten,she throw the garbage behind her on the road,neglecting there is a bin just not far from her.Just a few minutes later,an elder cleaner passes by and pick it up.
      This picture reflects a thought-provoking phenomenon in the society.Many people,both men and women,has overlooked the appearance of them and pay little attention on improving the quality of them.It has caused that there were always many bad things occurred everyday.In some extent,the society we lived in was just seemed like harmonious but not real beautiful.A case in point is that Reform and Open up in china has brought great changes in many aspects of our life.Some people who came from country and didn't received good education did business in big city,such as Beijing and Shanghai.The money they earned has became a trip.
      In conclusion.Everyone should understand the real beauty is not pretty appearance but the virtue we own.Only natives become more civilized can our society will be better.

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大頭大頭大頭鬼 · 發表于 2014-10-20 13:50

Beauty of mind does exert such a significant effect on our daily life that it was used to measure individual moral standards.However,as is subtly revealed inn the cartoon,there is a pretty girl,who conveniently threw the rubbish on the ground.And yet the crippled old man picked it up and chucked it in bin.As result,we are led to concluded that inner beauty is essential to become qualified citizens for one and all.
The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the negative influence of social civilization.It is also an epitome of the disproportionate relation between the beauty and the spirit of the bulk of people.What is more,this phenomenon bring about great loss of individual conduct and lack of guidance of family education.
It high time that we highlighted the significance of inner beauty and cultivated the citizens awareness that morality is essential to us.Only by enforcing these measures into practice,can our society be more harmonious,our life be more wonderful,and we,as individual,embrace more promising prospects.

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走南 · 發表于 2014-10-20 13:53

【作文隨手寫，老師來評分】英語一為什么發不了貼啊？不良信息是啥啊？

大頭大頭大頭鬼 · 發表于 2014-10-20 14:14

忘記寫標題了。。。影響大嗎？

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lx112 · 發表于 2014-10-20 14:24

作文隨手寫，老師來評分，英語二

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胡夢雙 · 發表于 2014-10-20 14:29

方會巖發表于 2014-10-20 10:41
鬧鬧的，你傳上來的作文看不太清楚哦，建議重新發一份，或者直接敲上來電子版的吧 ...

方老師，是直接發在這上面嗎？怎么才能知道自己的作文有沒有被你們看到呢？有沒有什么問題呢？今天晚上七點就要結束了，麻煩老師看到后告知一下，謝謝！

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