寫了一篇關(guān)于節(jié)約的英語作文

onice · 發(fā)表于 2012-1-4 13:24

本帖最后由 onice 于 2012-1-4 13:33 編輯

   As the vivid cartoon depicts, a little boy throws a package that still contains foods away, and an old woman picked it up.
      The purpose of the picture is to reveal that there is more and more wasteful phenomenon.Economization is the steadfast virtue of our nation. Why this phenomenon takes place, that is, nowadays, as the living standards improve, folks live a fullness life, some people flip the traditional virtues of economization from our memory. It will cause a serious adverse effect on social harmony if we turn a blind eye on this phenomenon.In addition, waste is not only a noble trait of character of a teenager, but also lead o some wicked traits which are harmful to the growing of a teenager.
  Taking into account all the analyses above, we must attach importance of economization. First, we should get actively to advocate the traditional virtue,【未完成，但是后面應(yīng)該是水到渠成】

hardick · 發(fā)表于 2012-1-4 13:31

LZ應(yīng)該注意檢查下語法錯(cuò)誤吧，感覺有很多。。

heathtd · 發(fā)表于 2012-1-4 13:53

語法錯(cuò)誤有一些

寂寞的阿白 · 發(fā)表于 2012-1-4 14:24

我勒個(gè)去啊LZ，這各種語法句型錯(cuò)誤啊……

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