寫了一篇關于節約的英語作文

onice

As the vivid cartoon depicts, a little boy throws a package that still contains foods away, and an old woman picked it up.         The purpose of the picture is to reveal that there is more and more wasteful phenomenon.Economization is the steadfast virtue of our nation. Why this phenomenon takes place, that is, nowadays, as the living standards improve, folks live a fullness life, some people flip the traditional virtues of economization from our memory. It will cause a serious adverse effect on social harmony if we turn a blind eye on this phenomenon.In addition, waste is not only a noble trait of character of a teenager, but also lead o some wicked traits which are harmful to the growing of a teenager.   Taking into account all the analyses above, we must attach importance of economization. First, we should get actively to advocate the traditional virtue,【未完成，但是后面應該是水到渠成】

hardick

LZ應該注意檢查下語法錯誤吧，感覺有很多。。

heathtd

語法錯誤有一些

寂寞的阿白

我勒個去啊LZ，這各種語法 句型錯誤啊……