因暗戀女主持人，遂有感而發終于用英文寫了作文，請指教

李小壞

                    

        Mei Mei was born in Shandong Province，where I have a quarter of the origin of.  So instinctively，liked her voice very，very！  And compared her beauty，I rather prefer her cuteness.  She really really cute！Ha ha… I so can not resist the temptation of her voice！

        The most beautiful voice in the world！！！

        Yes，each TV hostess needs ample time to rest.  I should not bother her too more through writing a lot of comments on her microblogging，learning much from a net friend of mine in South Africa who is a noble man as well as her fans. Hence，less absurd demands and odd questions will be requested by me in the future.  Everybody needs of time to realize the meaning of life，so am I .

        That is the secret which I would like to tell you. being pleased to share with you my affection ，and，it is a complex affection. Moreover，that feeling will be stay with me long，long time………

        Wish we all good luck，I don't quit …！！

李小壞

給點意見哈

lxhf0406

what kind of suggestions do you want me to give you? I would not say you should revise sth. or add a lot of things since there are too many problems. The only comment off the top of my head is that this is oral English!

YQX2

樓主是來搞笑的

阿逛

lz用機器翻譯的？

wayne0520

這主持人是誰

sunpengiloveyou

你要是這樣的語法寫考研作文 保證你完蛋 考研作文不允許有省略的 但是需要簡寫 簡寫不等于省略 口語詞匯不要用

李小壞

sunpengiloveyou 發表于 2011-12-6 13:37
你要是這樣的語法寫考研作文 保證你完蛋 考研作文不允許有省略的 但是需要簡寫 簡寫不等于省略 口語詞匯不 ...

考研不能寫省略句么么？？

李小壞

YQX2 發表于 2011-12-6 09:26
樓主是來搞笑的

木有搞笑，介是一個很嚴肅的問題

李小壞

阿逛 發表于 2011-12-6 11:36
lz用機器翻譯的？

沒有呀，確實沒用機器，用機器應該比這好吧，怎么這么說？？？