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龍呼晴 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:44

難道只有44樓才能發(fā)作文？

龍呼晴 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:44

算我無(wú)聊試一下，原諒我吧

龍呼晴 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:44

龍呼晴 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:45

A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

龍呼晴 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:45

不要啊，都占44樓了，怎么還木有？

tingtingwu · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:46

aliyxiang 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 13:44
enormous,tremendous

不是站在電腦上。是往它里走類

龍呼晴 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:51

A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

龍呼晴 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:51

好吧，算是真的發(fā)不了了

龍呼晴 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:52

龍呼晴發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 14:51
好吧，算是真的發(fā)不了了

誰(shuí)能告訴我消失的樓層是怎么回事？

奮斗1207 · 發(fā)表于 2014-11-11 15:02

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