考研寫作：“網購”熱點話題你來寫，我來評！

瘦呼呼 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:29

2樓~

瘦呼呼 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:29

1樓。也夠無聊的

瘦呼呼 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:29

A customer pulling a gigantic and absolutely empty shopping  cart stands on the computer. It seems that he wants to buy plenty of things on the Internet. Under the picture there are some eye-catching words reading: you can get everything you need with the Internet. This caption summarizes the profound message of this cartoon.
This picture reflects customer's dependence on the shopping at network. As the development of the Internet and the gradual perfection of the physical distribution systerm, shopping on the website becomes more and more popular, especially to people whose job is very heavy and to students in unversity. Therefore, the impact of shopping online is too important to ignore. A shopping website, Tianmao, earns 1 billion  RMB only in three minutes on the single day, which shows the effect of shopping online.
People should consider this phenomenon seriously. Although shopping on the Internet faciliate our life, it cannot give us the good or bad  experience we can get in reality. This means that some merchant may decieve us, making the shopping bothersome. So the government should take useful and reasonal measures to make the shopping online more safe and satisfactory.

wnan10 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:30

這個話題去年陜師大英語學科教學的908考的就是關于雙十一，網購現象

龍呼晴 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:40

A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.
我先占一樓，44再占一樓，嘻

龍呼晴 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:41

A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

龍呼晴 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:41

A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

龍呼晴 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:41

為什么發不了？

龍呼晴 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:43

A person is thrillingly pushing an empty trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who seems comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

龍呼晴 · 發表于 2014-11-11 14:43

依然發不了，這是怎么回事？

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