王江濤作文的一處語(yǔ)病討論

douglas778 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-2 21:17

四、2008年范文：道歉信看第二句 yesterday 開(kāi)頭那句

Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology toyou for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week.Yesterday I have come back from Canadaand I found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it atpresent.
The CD which I borrowed from you ismade in Canada,so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about you buyinganother CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find the similarone, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are anyother solutions you like, please let me know.
I am sorry again for my carelessness.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Yesterday I have come back from Canada and I found it in my luggage.
這句話時(shí)態(tài) 我覺(jué)得是錯(cuò)了

但王江濤還是比較權(quán)威的大家怎么看這句話

douglas778 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 10:19

大家?guī)蛶兔瞺

douglas778 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 12:13

有人嗎？

ddkk3000 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 13:46

提示: 作者被禁止或刪除內(nèi)容自動(dòng)屏蔽

douglas778 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 14:53

ddkk3000 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 13:46
哪里錯(cuò)了

時(shí)態(tài)，yesterday 用了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)
這是對(duì)的嗎？

douglas778 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 18:34

大家?guī)蛶兔Π?/td>

douglas778 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 21:10

頂啊！！

ddkk3000 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 23:17

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douglas778 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-4 10:02

有人解決下這個(gè)問(wèn)題嗎

douglas778 · 發(fā)表于 2011-10-4 10:09

ddkk3000 發(fā)表于 2011-10-3 23:17
我你對(duì)語(yǔ)法這么敏感

我覺(jué)得可以啊，過(guò)去完成時(shí)是過(guò)去完成的事，時(shí)間需要加上一個(gè)時(shí)段才是吧

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