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我弟弟寫了一篇考研小作文，感覺錯誤比較多，請英語高手指出行文特別是文風所犯錯誤，（總是感覺寫的是中國式英語，而非純英文寫作）謝謝，作文如下：
I have just come back and when pack up my luggage,I find the music disk borrowed from you two weeks ago.I am really sorry for forgetting to return it to you.

To solve the problem ,I would like to send it to you by mail .probably it will reach you a week later. In fact ,it is really kind of you to give me lots of help during my stay in canada.To show my appreciation. I will give you a picture book as a gift .

Please excuse me for my mistakes,I hope you will like the gift delivered to you .I looking forward to your reply.

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