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   Moral losing

While our economic development now has been rising up,some else aspects facing with people may fall behind.The vivid illustrating is like what the above cartoon gives that an old has slidden down,no one,however,seems to give her a hand.Such “meaningful” phenomenon might not take place rare where image shows.What can we be illuminated,apparently but thinking-provokingly,is the loss of public morality.Indeed worthy thinking what will happen if same things goes the similar situation.
   There are may several things accounting for that.Now,under such fierce competition among us,it seems hard to give some-at least a little-focus on from people on other sides except the pursuit of economic benefits and satisfaction with materials，having lead the concentration on public values to be naturally overlooked.What's more,resulting from fearing being invited unnecessary troubles possibly after warm-hearted behaviors given,this is also another explanation halting people's intention to offer assistance.
   For the potential terrible influence on both social development，and even impact with our superior traditional cultures，from the declining of moral values，it is crucial that some actions now should be taken，among everyone.Some encouragement could be awarded to stimulate people more emphasis on morality and happy providing helping.In addition,it is beneficial for us-whether children or adults-to let awareness concerning with morality construction to some extent improved.Both approaches,combining with the title of constructing  harmony society,what a wonderful environment we enjoy will be！
這是我第一次寫社會問題，希望大家廣發意見！祝愿大家都能考上理想院校！！！

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