英語寫作有五檔，你是第幾檔？

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英語寫作有五檔，你是第幾檔？

● 一檔：離題，胡說八道

● 二檔：胡言亂語，沒邏輯

● 三檔：說人話

●四檔：說漂亮話

● 五檔：說有設(shè)計(jì)的漂亮話

● 高分/滿分 =精彩語言、連貫結(jié)構(gòu)、清晰內(nèi)容

我們該如何向高分靠攏呢？我們就得學(xué)習(xí)高分模板，然后個(gè)性化，詞匯要有高級詞匯、句子要有高級句式，這些都是需要去積累噠~

一篇文章有三個(gè)框架：

開頭+中間+結(jié)尾

開頭段：話題引起 + 圖畫描述/圖表描述/諺語說明/個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)

示例1：

網(wǎng)購 online shopping

①所有人都注意到這樣一個(gè)事實(shí)，網(wǎng)上購物在中國已經(jīng)成了一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象。

②與此同時(shí)，網(wǎng)購的利與弊引起了公眾的廣泛關(guān)注。

詞匯：

網(wǎng)上購物 online shopping

利 和 弊advantages and disadvantages

與此同時(shí) Meanwhile

句式：

①所有人都注意到這樣一個(gè)事實(shí)，

Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that

② ... 在中國已經(jīng)成了一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象。

… has become a popular phenomenon in China

③ … 引起了公眾的廣泛關(guān)注。

… have aroused wide concern among the public

參考答案：

① Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that purchasing products online has become a popular phenomenon in China.

② Meanwhile, the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping have aroused wide concern among the public.

示例2：

Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own.

①現(xiàn)在有一種趨勢，越來越多的大學(xué)生在畢業(yè)之后選擇創(chuàng)業(yè)。

②畢業(yè)之后是找工作還是創(chuàng)業(yè)，這個(gè)問題引起了公眾廣泛的關(guān)注。

詞匯：

創(chuàng)業(yè) ：start a business of one’s own

找工作：find a job

句式

①現(xiàn)在有一種趨勢，

There is a growing tendency nowadays that …

②是… 還是… 這個(gè)問題引起了公眾廣泛的關(guān)注。

Whether one should do A or do B has aroused a heated discussion among the public.

參考答案：

① There is a growing tendency nowadays that an increasing number of college students would like to start a business of their own after graduation.

② Whether they should find a job or start a business has aroused a heated discussion among the public.

示例3：教育（投資）的回報(bào)

①引出話題：越來越多人意識到了學(xué)歷和證書的重要性。

②圖表描述：如表所示，失業(yè)率從博士以上學(xué)歷人群的 1.9%明顯上升到高中以 下學(xué)歷人群的 14.9%。

③圖表總結(jié)：盡管數(shù)字孤立，但緊密聯(lián)系。

詞匯：

證書和學(xué)歷 degree and certificate

失業(yè)率 unemployment rate

高中學(xué)歷 high school diploma

圖表描述公式：

As is indicated in the chart, the number of 主題 + 變化 + 程度 + 范圍 。

As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% to 14.9%

句式：

①越來越多人意識到了… … 的重要性。

There is a growing worldwide awareness of the importance of …

②如表所示，失業(yè)率從博士以上學(xué)歷人群的 1.9%明顯上升到高中以下學(xué)歷人群的 14.9%。

As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% to 14.9%.

③盡管數(shù)字孤立，但緊密聯(lián)系。

Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely

參考答案：

① There is a growing worldwide awareness of the importance of degree and certificate.

② As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% of people who have a doctoral degree to 14.9 of people who have less than a high school diploma.

③ Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely

示例4

Write an essay commenting on the saying, “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen.”more essay writing skills on essay.lxws.net

①當(dāng)聽到這句諺語的時(shí)候，我們很容易理解其寓意。

②這句話展現(xiàn)了作為一個(gè)參與者而不是觀望者的重要性。

詞匯：

寓意 implied meaning

參與者 participant

觀望者 onlooker

句式：

①當(dāng)聽到這句諺語的時(shí)候，我們很容易理解其寓意。

When hearing the remark “…”, we can easily understand its implied meaning.

②這句話展現(xiàn)了… 的重要性。

This saying shows the importance of …

參考答案：

① When hearing the remark “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen”, we can easily understand its implied meaning.

② This saying shows the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers.