英語寫作有五檔，你是第幾檔？

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英語寫作有五檔，你是第幾檔？

● 一檔：離題，胡說八道

● 二檔：胡言亂語，沒邏輯

● 三檔：說人話

●四檔：說漂亮話

● 五檔：說有設計的漂亮話

● 高分/滿分 =精彩語言、連貫結構、清晰內容

我們該如何向高分靠攏呢？我們就得學習高分模板，然后個性化，詞匯要有高級詞匯、句子要有高級句式，這些都是需要去積累噠~

一篇文章有三個框架：

開頭+中間+結尾

開頭段：話題引起 + 圖畫描述/圖表描述/諺語說明/個人觀點

示例1：

網購 online shopping

①所有人都注意到這樣一個事實，網上購物在中國已經成了一個普遍現象。

②與此同時，網購的利與弊引起了公眾的廣泛關注。

詞匯：

網上購物 online shopping

利 和 弊advantages and disadvantages

與此同時 Meanwhile

句式：

①所有人都注意到這樣一個事實，

Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that

② ... 在中國已經成了一個普遍現象。

… has become a popular phenomenon in China

③ … 引起了公眾的廣泛關注。

… have aroused wide concern among the public

參考答案：

① Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that purchasing products online has become a popular phenomenon in China.

② Meanwhile, the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping have aroused wide concern among the public.

示例2：

Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own.

①現在有一種趨勢，越來越多的大學生在畢業之后選擇創業。

②畢業之后是找工作還是創業，這個問題引起了公眾廣泛的關注。

詞匯：

創業 ：start a business of one’s own

找工作：find a job

句式

①現在有一種趨勢，

There is a growing tendency nowadays that …

②是… 還是… 這個問題引起了公眾廣泛的關注。

Whether one should do A or do B has aroused a heated discussion among the public.

參考答案：

① There is a growing tendency nowadays that an increasing number of college students would like to start a business of their own after graduation.

② Whether they should find a job or start a business has aroused a heated discussion among the public.

示例3：教育（投資）的回報

①引出話題：越來越多人意識到了學歷和證書的重要性。

②圖表描述：如表所示，失業率從博士以上學歷人群的 1.9%明顯上升到高中以 下學歷人群的 14.9%。

③圖表總結：盡管數字孤立，但緊密聯系。

詞匯：

證書和學歷 degree and certificate

失業率 unemployment rate

高中學歷 high school diploma

圖表描述公式：

As is indicated in the chart, the number of 主題 + 變化 + 程度 + 范圍 。

As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% to 14.9%

句式：

①越來越多人意識到了… … 的重要性。

There is a growing worldwide awareness of the importance of …

②如表所示，失業率從博士以上學歷人群的 1.9%明顯上升到高中以下學歷人群的 14.9%。

As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% to 14.9%.

③盡管數字孤立，但緊密聯系。

Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely

參考答案：

① There is a growing worldwide awareness of the importance of degree and certificate.

② As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% of people who have a doctoral degree to 14.9 of people who have less than a high school diploma.

③ Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely

示例4

Write an essay commenting on the saying, “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen.”more essay writing skills on essay.lxws.net

①當聽到這句諺語的時候，我們很容易理解其寓意。

②這句話展現了作為一個參與者而不是觀望者的重要性。

詞匯：

寓意 implied meaning

參與者 participant

觀望者 onlooker

句式：

①當聽到這句諺語的時候，我們很容易理解其寓意。

When hearing the remark “…”, we can easily understand its implied meaning.

②這句話展現了… 的重要性。

This saying shows the importance of …

參考答案：

① When hearing the remark “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen”, we can easily understand its implied meaning.

② This saying shows the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers.