【幫幫答疑】英語專業碩士手把手教你準備高分作文模板！

考研幫 · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:09

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（備考中的那些折磨你的問題，考研幫愿意找來一打學長學姐幫你解答，每周一期《幫幫答疑》，千萬表錯過。如果你有想要解答的問題，戳這里提交，幫幫為你找學長學姐答疑！）

??【本期答疑簡介】

僅剩26天啦，今天本幫會開啟一場持續一周，有關英語作文的答疑活動，近期被“英語作文如何準備”這一問題折磨的研友們，快來踴躍參加、提問吧！英語翻譯碩士學姐為你“開掛”，帶你飛！

?通過這次答疑，你將會厘清以下復習疑惑——

作文想拿高分，該如何準備自己的模板？

哪些是比較好的文章結構？

哪些連詞、句型太老套，千萬別用？

從哪兒尋找地道的英語句式？

?需要這次答疑活動的同學：

如果你目前對準備英語作文毫無頭緒，你將收獲滿滿的計劃！

如果你目前對準備英語作文有計劃卻不知道怎樣實施，你將收獲高效的方法！

如果知道怎么做，你也可以和學姐討論比較!

??【答疑人介紹】

樂塵lll，鄭州大學翻譯碩士，學姐在考研幫發布過“2017鄭州大學翻譯碩士考研經驗貼”（戳這里看詳情），令許多小伙伴都受益匪淺。此次答疑活動，大家可以更近距離地與學姐進行實時交流，學姐定當知無不言言無不盡！

??【答疑方式】

　　在本帖中回復【我要提問】+問題，將你的問題拋給學姐，學姐會為您解答在學習中遇到的問題哦~

??【答疑時間】

11月27日——12月3日，期間有任何問題都可在本帖留言哦！

??【友情提示】

請有疑問的小伙伴將本帖所有問題和xx的回復都看一遍哦，或許你問的問題別人問過了，或許你忽略的問題別人提出來了，考研小技能，看到就是賺到，不要嫌麻煩不看哦，有些精彩不可錯過！

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樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:14

大家好，非常感謝工作人員邀請來答疑。首先聲明一下，本人所介紹的是一些通用的英語寫作經驗，既不針對英語一，也不針對英語二，只是分享一下本人的英語寫作復習經驗，供大家參考，希望能對大家有所幫助。現在最近這段時間學業任務任務比較繁重，事情會比較多，可能無法及時對大家的問題進行回答，如果有問題，我會盡量抽空回復，還請大家諒解。以下內容一部分整理自寫作輔導講義。

樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:14

如何寫模板作文
一、       通用寫作方法
?       1）把真題范文、模擬沖刺范文視作一個核心資源庫，學習掌握所有動詞句型結構。熟練背誦后學會寫長句的感覺
?       2）熟練掌握開頭、結尾的基本方法和各種類型段落的寫作要點。
?       3）熟練掌一些諺語警句的附錄。

樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:16

二、寫作的注意事項
?1．使用了正確的語法結構，比方說，動詞時態一致、主謂一致、用詞準確（尤其是名詞、動詞、形容詞）、冠詞錯誤和介詞錯誤。
2．句式有變化: 定語從句，狀語從句，強調句，被動句等優先考慮。尤其“四大句型”。
3．使用了一定的詞匯量。
4．拼寫沒有錯誤。
5．在每段的主題句中都表明了這個段落的中心思想，所有擴展句都緊扣主題。
6．使用了過渡性詞語，因而句子之間和段落之間都有邏輯性和條理性。
7．每一段話都得到充分的展開。
8．提供了足夠的細節、例子或推理性論據。
9．明確的觀點。
10 . 注意書法；盡可能不要分字；寫大概10至12個字一行，這樣可限制自己字體不會太大，字與字之間的空位也不會太大，而且數字時也比較方便；盡量選擇粗線條的原子筆和藍色墨水。心理學來說，較粗的筆跡令人有較深的印象，但不可太粗，而藍色令人看得舒服和輕松；
11.審題時候認真思考，不要立即進入寫作，找出自己的文章思路非常關鍵；
12.標點符號絕不能用錯，少用感嘆號（！）和問號（？），注意中英文逗號的區分用法。中國學生應學會使用兩種標點（破折號+冒號），尤其對主題句有用。

樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:17

三、書面語實用連詞和副詞短語:
? 表次序和時間：first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), first of all, next, finally, eventually, meanwhile, gradually, step by step, in the future, in the past, recently, currently, first and foremost, then, last of all, eventually, lastly, last but not least, for one thing, one the one hand…on the other hand; before, since, as, until, meanwhile, at the moment, whenever, as soon as, just as
? 表程度和附加：severely, seriously, heavily, strongly, possibly, perhaps, probably, likely, obviously, apparently, seemingly, unknowingly, maybe, as well, may as well, rarely, hardly, seldom, also, in addition, furthermore, moreover, besides(書面語中最好少用what is more), except for , apart from, as well as, as mentioned above(earlier), including
? 表相似或相反: similarly, in the same way, as well as, again, both, neither, although, be that as it may, but, even though, however, in contrast, nevertheless, on the contrary, on the other hand, yet, in spite of , despite, whereas, in other words, it seems that, it appears that, otherwise, while, whereas, whilst
? 表總結和結束: to conclude, all in all, in conclusion, to sum up, in a word, in brief, on the whole, in summary, by and large, in general
? 表結果、目的和推論：in order to(that), so…that, too…to, so that, so as to, enough to, and so, because of this, as a consequence, consequently, as a result, for this reason, hence, therefore, thereby, so, thus
? 表強調或更差:as known to all, as we all know, it is generally\publicly known that…, not only…but (also), it is…that, above all, especially, in particular, indeed, most importantly, the most important is…, surely, equally important is…, more importantly, more centrally, worse, making matters worse, to make it worse, more worryingly
? 表舉例：for example, for instance, take…as an example, one such example is…, take… as an instance, such as, like…, as Newton put it, as a proverb says, as a saying goes, just as\like, namely, to illustrate; a case in point goes to…
? 表表原因或方式：because (of), for, since, as, due to, thanks to, in terms of, in light of(=according to) in the way that…, by means of, via, through, by, with(out), according to, lead to, give rise to, contribute to, attribute a to b, conform to, abide by, concerning, as regards, with regard to, in this regard, the reason why, in other words, owing to, as concerning\s, considering that, thanks to, A means\causes\incurs\entails\precedes B

以上各類短語一種記一到兩個就可以了，能夠替換著用

樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:17

四、文章結構
內容第一位、語言第二位、結構第三位：
1、內容：
1）基本正確：及格分
2）豐富多變（詞匯+句型—）：
? 1.大量使用不同主語：
? 1) (Self-dependence) is significant.
? 2) I maintain that independence is vital.
? 3) It is crucial.
? 4) (Being independent) is essential.
? 5) (To be self-dependent) is of great importance.
? It is of great importance (to be self-dependent).
? 6) (That we should depend on ourselves) is of utmost significance.
?       It is of utmost significance (that we should depend on ourselves).
? 2.大量使用被動語態：
? 3. 大量使用主系表結構：
? 4.大量使用定語狀語：
?    1）形容詞、副詞：
? 2）詞組：
?       a great many students
?       the majority of students
?       3）不定式：
?       a student (to crack CET-4)
? 4）介詞短語：a student (in NOS)
? 5）分詞短語：
?    （1）現在分詞短語：
?    a student (being 20)
?    （2）過去分詞短語：
?    a student (born in Beijing)
? 6）從句：
?       （1）定語從句
?       （2）狀語從句
? 5. 大量使用精彩詞組:
? universally acknowledge
? 6. 大量使用精彩句型：
? It is universally acknowledged that …
? （Pride and Prejudice）
? 7. 大量使用精彩從句：
? 便條1-3個，作文5-7個
?    1）定語、狀語、賓語從句
?    2）主語、表語、同位語從句
8、大量使用不同時態：
? 1）一般現在
? 2）現在進行
? 3）現在完成
? 4）一般過去
? 5）一般將來

樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:18

七大亮點設置：

（一）活用詞匯：
1、Natural disasters claim hundreds of lives every year.
2、I do appreciate your efforts.
3、Once in front of me, lay a real chance. Yet, I did not value it. Not until the moment I lost it, did I realize how regretful I was. If God gave me another opportunity, I would never stop making progress.
4、I sat outside in the hall. Everything inside me has gone away. I didn’t think. I could not think. I knew she was leaving me, but I prayed she not. (Ernest Hemingway: The Sun Also Rises)
（二）平行排比：A culture can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared.
（三）術語表達：environmental protection/awareness

? 1.保持生態平衡
? 2.可持續發展戰略
? 3.節能
? 4.減排（減少溫室氣體排放）
? 5.溫室效應
? 1. keep ecological balance
? 2. sustainable development strategy
? 3. save the energy
? 4. reduce the emission of greenhouse gases
? 5. greenhouse effect
? 6.清潔可再生能源
? 7.低碳經濟
? 8.沙塵暴
? 9.雪災
? 10.臺風
? 6.clean renewable energy
? 7. low carbon economy
? 8. sandstorm
? 9. snowstorm
? 10.typhoon
? 11. 沙丘
? 12. 濫砍濫伐
? 13. 沙漠化
? 14. 水土流失
? 15. 破壞性災難性地震
? 11. sand dune/hill
? 12. deforestation, clear-cutting
? 13. desertification
? 14. water and soil erosion
? 15. destructive and disastrous earthquake
（四）詞組運用：with due consideration of, take into account/consideration
（五）句型框架：
1、
（1）只有這樣下崗工人才能徹底擺脫貧困并且重新獲得他們生命中的尊嚴。
（2）總而言之，只有長期學習才有助于你掌握大的詞匯量。
（3）考慮到上述所有論證，政府早就該實行改革把傳統教育模式轉變為素質教育。
2、
（1）Only in this way can laid-off workers completely shrug off poverty and regain their dignity in life.
（2）In conclusion, it is persistent work that is conducive to your grasping a large/considerable vocabulary.
（3）Given all the above arguments, it is high time that the authorities enforced reforms to convert traditional education strategy into education for all-round development/quality-oriented education.
（六）名人名言：
As John F. Kennedy put it, “Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country.”
As John Adams said, “ United we stand, divided we fall”.
（七）英語諺語：
1、Just as an old saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.”
2、Just as an old saying goes, “God only helps those who help themselves.”

樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:19

一些好用的詞組句式
Play a pivotal role in --- (在---中起關鍵作用)
Expand one’s outlook ( 開闊視野，代替horizon)
Remove the barrier for (為了---消除障礙)
Be monotonous and unmotivating ( 單調而且無法給人動力的)
Spin out of control (失去控制的)
Be overly dependent on ( 對-----過度依賴)
Have detrimental influence upon （對----有壞的影響）
Is markedly incompatible with (與---明顯不協調)
-----is the cornerstone of –（----的基石）
Sth is in the best interest of someone（做某事符合---的利益）
A can be attributable to B ( A 可以歸因于B，B 是事情發生的reason)
Be afflicted with (遭受) 代替suffer from
Copy sth mechanically , apply sth with sth (對---機械照搬)
Be saturated with sth （充斥著）
Run contrary to （與---背道而馳）
A is characterized by (A 的特征是)
A constitutes ( A 構成了)
This trend is not restricted to (這個現象不僅僅局限在)
Be interrelated and interdependent （相互聯系，相互依賴）
Be not mutually exclusive (兩者并不排斥)
Sth is of overriding importance (至關重要) =It is imperative that
Sth should be condemned rather than condoned. (某事應該被譴責而不是被寬恕)
Hinge on (取決于 eg. Success of such efforts hinges on contribution from the authorities)
The proportion of ( ) is very high (…..的比例很高)

樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:20

常見的插入語
Comparative speaking,
To a certain degree
On a large scale
To take the idea further
Putting the discussion in a wider context

In a few words 簡而言之
In other words 換句話說
In general 一般來說
To our knowledge 據我說知
As a matter of fact
Strictly speaking
Judging from
To put it plainly
To put sth in a nutshell

In contrast
Conversely
Whereas
Standing in glaring contrast to ---

樂塵lll · 發表于 2017-11-27 10:29

七大亮點設置：

（一）活用詞匯：
1、Natural disasters claim hundreds of lives every year.
2、I do appreciate your efforts.
3、Once in front of me, lay a real chance. Yet, I did not value it. Not until the moment I lost it, did I realize how regretful I was. If God gave me another opportunity, I would never stop making progress.
4、I sat outside in the hall. Everything inside me has gone away. I didn’t think. I could not think. I knew she was leaving me, but I prayed she not. (Ernest Hemingway: The Sun Also Rises)
（二）平行排比：A culture can be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared.
（三）術語表達：environmental protection/awareness

? 1.保持生態平衡
? 2.可持續發展戰略
? 3.節能
? 4.減排（減少溫室氣體排放）
? 5.溫室效應
? 1. keep ecological balance
? 2. sustainable development strategy
? 3. save the energy
? 4. reduce the emission of greenhouse gases
? 5. greenhouse effect
? 6.清潔可再生能源
? 7.低碳經濟
? 8.沙塵暴
? 9.雪災
? 10.臺風
? 6.clean renewable energy
? 7. low carbon economy
? 8. sandstorm
? 9. snowstorm
? 10.typhoon
? 11. 沙丘
? 12. 濫砍濫伐
? 13. 沙漠化
? 14. 水土流失
? 15. 破壞性災難性地震
? 11. sand dune/hill
? 12. deforestation, clear-cutting
? 13. desertification
? 14. water and soil erosion
? 15. destructive and disastrous earthquake
（四）詞組運用：with due consideration of, take into account/consideration
（五）句型框架：
1、
（1）只有這樣下崗工人才能徹底擺脫貧困并且重新獲得他們生命中的尊嚴。
（2）總而言之，只有長期學習才有助于你掌握大的詞匯量。
（3）考慮到上述所有論證，政府早就該實行改革把傳統教育模式轉變為素質教育。
2、
（1）Only in this way can laid-off workers completely shrug off poverty and regain their dignity in life.
（2）In conclusion, it is persistent work that is conducive to your grasping a large/considerable vocabulary.
（3）Given all the above arguments, it is high time that the authorities enforced reforms to convert traditional education strategy into education for all-round development/quality-oriented education.
（六）名人名言：
As John F. Kennedy put it, “Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country.”
As John Adams said, “ United we stand, divided we fall”.
（七）英語諺語：
1、Just as an old saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.”
2、Just as an old saying goes, “God only helps those who help themselves.”

六、一些好用的詞組句式
Play a pivotal role in --- (在---中起關鍵作用)
Expand one’s outlook ( 開闊視野，代替horizon)
Remove the barrier for (為了---消除障礙)
Be monotonous and unmotivating ( 單調而且無法給人動力的)
Spin out of control (失去控制的)
Be overly dependent on ( 對-----過度依賴)
Have detrimental influence upon （對----有壞的影響）
Is markedly incompatible with (與---明顯不協調)
-----is the cornerstone of –（----的基石）
Sth is in the best interest of someone（做某事符合---的利益）
A can be attributable to B  ( A 可以歸因于B，B 是事情發生的reason)
Be afflicted with (遭受) 代替suffer from
Copy sth mechanically , apply sth with sth (對---機械照搬)
Be saturated with sth （充斥著）
Run contrary to （與---背道而馳）
A is characterized by (A 的特征是)
A constitutes ( A 構成了)
This trend is not restricted to (這個現象不僅僅局限在)
Be interrelated and interdependent （相互聯系，相互依賴）
Be not mutually exclusive (兩者并不排斥)
Sth is of overriding importance (至關重要) =It is imperative that
Sth should be condemned rather than condoned. (某事應該被譴責而不是被寬恕)
Hinge on (取決于 eg. Success of such efforts hinges on contribution from the authorities)
The proportion of (  ) is very high (…..的比例很高)

總之，英語寫作是輸出性質的，需要在自身積累的基礎上去進行寫作。多背誦然后在考前自己限時練筆才是王道。真題范文是最準確的，但很多考研老師給的模板都可以用來參考，化為己用。太過老套的句子就不要用了，盡量變換句型，在短篇文章里展示自己的英語能力，針對考試類型備好模板，寫好自己的作文結構，盡量寫地道的英語句子。背誦真題優秀文章，如果可以，最好分析原文，背誦高級詞匯句型。最后預祝各位研友考試順利，金榜題名。

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