考研寫作：“網購”熱點話題你來寫，我來評！

monicalixiaoya · 發表于 2014-11-11 16:33

點火櫻桃發表于 2014-11-11 16:33
已哭瞎=_=

抱抱妹子，你可以搶111…

點火櫻桃 · 發表于 2014-11-11 16:43

算了不等了，靠不了老師靠研友。。水平很爛，惠其指正。。。
英語一：網購
This picture has revealed an emergent phenomenon in our society.In the middle of the cartoon exists a laptop,on which stands a person who is pushing a shopping cart,intended to walk into the computer screen. Under the picture is the caption said "we can get everything if we have the Internet. "
Just as the picture showed,the prevailing application of the powerful Internet has brought us a lot,with which comes an amazing but irresistible object:online shopping. This object,which is still in its childhood,has nearly swept across everywhere in China. But what makes it so hot? Besides the popularization of computer and the Internet ,the prosperity of market economy may also plays a role. Moreover,the online shopping provides opportunities to both sellers who want to earn profit with low costs and buyers who are passionate to possess goods that cheap and fine.
Will online shopping keep growing?From my view,the prospect seems promising.Indeed,the online shopping has also led to some problems such as financial deception and indulgence of it,but this may be dealt with or relieved during the process of its normalization.（193words）

anyanan826 · 發表于 2014-11-11 16:56

很贊！

淺淺的53536 · 發表于 2014-11-11 16:59

龍呼晴發表于 2014-11-11 14:40
A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly d ...

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Brookkkk · 發表于 2014-11-11 17:18

老師求看呀～

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