【作文你來寫，我來評】免費考研英語作文測評活動結束

備考小弟 · 發表于 2014-10-18 14:28

作文隨手寫老師來評分英語一

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604114279 · 發表于 2014-10-18 14:45

怎么發呢

紙飛機zfr · 發表于 2014-10-18 14:48

小黃瓜2014 發表于 2014-10-17 17:15
從小學開始，就討厭寫作文，后來才知道英語作文才是真的痛啊

同感同感。討厭寫作文

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備考小弟 · 發表于 2014-10-18 15:00

604114279 發表于 2014-10-18 14:45
怎么發呢

直接回復帖子就好

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kaname2 · 發表于 2014-10-18 15:04

周末來一篇，這個活動好，大家作文都開始準備了么？？我還沒開始，正好督促了！

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kaname2 · 發表于 2014-10-18 15:06

云淡風輕地盤發表于 2014-10-18 12:39
為什么進去之后發不了圖片，不是說可以把寫好的作文拍下來傳圖嗎，為什么發不了，難道要直接寫在帖子里？？ ...

你不是發了么……

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龍呼晴 · 發表于 2014-10-18 15:22

為么我發作文帖子說我包含不良信息，我是大大的良民呢

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tingzhou1990 · 發表于 2014-10-18 15:23

頂一個

心給唯一的他 · 發表于 2014-10-18 15:27

請點評。。。謝謝

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龍呼晴 · 發表于 2014-10-18 15:28

The set of pictures above vividly depict the different behaviors of people treated with litters.In the first picture，wearing a pair of cool sunglasses,a beautiful dress and a pair of fashionable shoes trimmed with glitter rhinestones,a very charming girl throws away a banana skin in despite of a dustin not far away and then goes away happily with her bare banana.Ironically,in the second picture,a disable man who has only one leg is laboriously picking up the peer thrown by that striking girl.
The purpose of the cartoons is to show us that beauty is far beyond something superficial and due attention should be paid to the cultivation of inner personality.The gorgeous girl is naturally associated with those who are lack of real beauty,just caring about the appearance themselves;the disable man epitomizes those who have golden hearts which are the most valuable in the world.It is apparent that the golden hearts are more honorable than the beauty of the shallow girl.
Hence,it is imperative for us to cultivate the inner beauty.For one thing,we should enhance the awareness of people that inner beauty is great significance to us.For another,we should appear to the authorities concerned to emphasize on the publicity of fine people and fine deeds.Only in this way can everyone be more perfect,and only in this way can each corner of our society be lit up by beauty.

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