想知道外國人怎么用很簡單，google一下你的句子，看有沒有一樣的，你會發現instinctively基本只在字典類里面出現，沒見過在句子開頭用的，南非母語是英語的網友？他要覺得對的那我覺得他語法有問題，別覺得我cocky，外國人的語法不見得就都對，而且還是南非不是英國美國的

canonbli 發表于 2011-12-7 23:27
where I have a quarter of the origin of，沒見過這種表達；So instinctively，liked her voice very，ver ...

where I have a quarter of the origin of，這個的確可能不對，但是我也不知道怎么說好。

instinctively基本上沒人用，是不是太夸張了！

后面半句沒主語那個，那個是允許省略的。但是考研最好不要省略是真的

compared her beauty 是肯定可以的，我專門咨詢過南非母語是英語的網友。

rather跟prefer不能連著用，這個我也不知道了……

where I have a quarter of the origin of，沒見過這種表達；So instinctively，liked her voice very，very！instinctively基本上沒人用，后面半句沒主語，very much不是very
And compared her beauty；compared什么都沒有肯定錯的，一般用comparing with
后面rather跟prefer不能連著用，基本每句話都有錯誤，我不想一一指出了

canonbli 發表于 2011-12-7 10:00
樓上某位的baby english比較恰當的形容了本文的水平，很多表達都有錯誤，更像是不知道怎么表達查了下字典硬 ...

什么錯誤，請具體指出，以理服人！

李小壞 發表于 2011-12-7 08:01
你的水平可以拿滿分了

Were it not for the support furnished by the dictionary and google, which offered me an immense amount of guidence with respect to language usages , probably I would end up in even plainer infants' English.  
Depression and desperation overwhems me whenever I have to consult the dictionary and the internet, both being not available in the examnation room.

Anyway, with 30 days still awaiting ahead, it is never too late to clear up the past and begin resolution.

Cheer up buddy, please accept my heartful  encouragement.

By painstaking apprenticeship, your writing ability is bound to wittness a remarkable progress.

As the saying goes, helping others is to enjoy yourself. If there is any mistakes in what I had typed here, please feel free to inform me, for which I will be much obliged without feeling embarrassed.

···································································································Your sincerely
························································································A humble learner，young， simple， sometimes naive

樓上某位的baby english比較恰當的形容了本文的水平，很多表達都有錯誤，更像是不知道怎么表達查了下字典硬套的

yuanzhenmao 發表于 2011-12-7 00:53
Admittedly, you are deft at integrating theory into practice, in other words, applying your language ...

你的水平可以拿滿分了

Admittedly, you are deft at integrating theory into practice, in other words, applying your language talents in writing this essay to the good looking female, which sparks my impulse to summit my comments.

Despite the fact that your lovable baby English is agreeable with enormous affections，

it proves to be  difficult to the point of impossibility to acquire any admiration from those who is scheduled to  grade your composition.

In a bid to gain favorable grades, richly refined, uphostered and elegant words shall prevail against the plain ones, even though the latter ones are more preferred by a good many westerners for their brevity and clarity.

李小壞 發表于 2011-12-6 16:18
考研不能寫省略句么么？？

最好不要 因為你不會省略 有些地方不能省略的  呵呵 老師批改作文只是30秒的事情 乍一看沒看清楚你寫的什么啊 你說這個。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。