四六級(jí)寫作必備：做好小事的重要性

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復(fù)習(xí)一篇作文，重點(diǎn)是范文中的句子，我把這些句子稱之為“功能表達(dá)”，也就是說，背寫的時(shí)候要注意兩點(diǎn)：功能+表達(dá)。

功能，就是說這句話的作用，可能是表現(xiàn)象、觀點(diǎn)、建議、展望未來、意義、危害、概述圖畫等

表達(dá)，重點(diǎn)是英文句子的框架，如果一句話特別長(zhǎng)，先背英文框架。背會(huì)了框架（句子主干），再添加一些修飾成分，就是一個(gè)復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)句子，顯得水平高了點(diǎn)

當(dāng)然，今天發(fā)的內(nèi)容都是上課講過的，你看看就當(dāng)是復(fù)習(xí)了；如果沒時(shí)間看，也沒關(guān)系，記得多聽課。

1. 圖畫作文:優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)(做好小事很重要)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

下面是范文，你要重點(diǎn)記得是句子，句子的前后順序可以調(diào)整；句子很多，可以不全部背寫，選幾個(gè)跟自己有緣的、能背會(huì)的就行。當(dāng)然，這些句子對(duì)于六級(jí)備考，也有一定幫助，但更建議你去聽六級(jí)的趙婕和袁雨斌老師講授的寫作課內(nèi)容，更系統(tǒng)、更全面、針對(duì)性更強(qiáng)。

首段:圖畫描述

This drawing, apparently, can be associated with the critical significance of doing small things. In the picture, the youngster expresses his worries about “disposing of nuclear waste”. To his surprise, his father points at the dustbin, telling him that if he can empty the dustbin there, he can do anything.

二段:圖畫主題 + 現(xiàn)象 + 意義

The father means that if young people dream to achieve success, it is sensible for them to start with little jobs. Admittedly, in the present-day society, it is a common phenomenon for many teenagers to neglect tiny things in life, such as cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. Why? The reason is that a growing number of young people find it rather useless to deal with these things. A typical example is the boy in the picture. Nonetheless, it is these small tasks that ensure young people to master sufficient knowledge, competence and experience. Actually, wise people in large numbers have come to recognize the significance of these small things. Doing small things brings us skills, arouses our passion for success and helps us to make progress.

尾段:觀點(diǎn) + 建議 + 展望

As a college student, I am convinced that it is exceedingly necessary for young people to strengthen our comprehensive quality by doing small things. Accordingly, we should educate and encourage our friends and acquaintances to foster this positive awareness and habit. We, sparing no efforts to do so, may witness a hopeful and promising future of our work and study. Everyone should bear in mind that a big success originates from everyday small progress.(282 詞)

顯然，這幅圖能自然聯(lián)系到做好小事的重要性。圖畫中，一個(gè)年輕 人表達(dá)了自己對(duì)“核廢料處理”的擔(dān)憂。使他感到吃驚的是，他爸爸指 著垃圾筐告訴他，如果能把垃圾筐清空，他就能做好一切。

父親的意思是，如果年輕人想要成功，就應(yīng)該明智地從小的工作開 始做起。確實(shí)，在當(dāng)今社會(huì)，很多年輕人忽略身邊的各種小事已經(jīng)成為 一種常見現(xiàn)象，例如打掃房間、洗衣服和清理垃圾筐。為什么?因?yàn)樵?來越多的年輕人覺得處理這些小事沒有用。一個(gè)典型例子就是圖畫中的 小孩。然而，正是這些小事確保年輕人能掌握足夠的知識(shí)、能力和經(jīng)驗(yàn)。事實(shí)上，很多聰明人已經(jīng)意識(shí)到這些小事的重要性。做好這些小事帶給 我們技能，喚起我們對(duì)成功的熱情，幫助我們進(jìn)步。

作為一名大學(xué)生，我堅(jiān)信年輕人很有必要通過做好小事提升自己的 整體素質(zhì)。因此，我們應(yīng)該教育和鼓勵(lì)我們的朋友和熟人培養(yǎng)這種積極 的意識(shí)和習(xí)慣。如果我們不遺余力地這樣來做，未來我們的工作和生活 將充滿光明和希望。每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該牢記大的成功源自于每天小的進(jìn)步。

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悲觀 / 樂觀 pessimism/ optimism
勤奮 diligence n./ diligent adj.
耐心 patience n./ patient adj.
尊老愛幼 respect the old and care for the young
創(chuàng)新 innovation n./ innovate v./ innovative adj.
感謝 gratitude n./ appreciation n.
美德 virtue n.
謹(jǐn)慎 prudence n./ prudent adj.
逆境 setbacks
成功無捷徑 There is no shortcut to success.
終身學(xué)習(xí) lifelong/ lifetime study
幽默感 a sense of humor
溝通 communication
身心健康 physical and mental health
捐獻(xiàn) donation n./ donate v.
愛國(guó)主義 patriotism n.
奉獻(xiàn) contribution n./ contribute v.
夢(mèng)想 ambition/ dream
機(jī)遇 opportunity
節(jié)約 thrifty adj./ thrift n.
奉獻(xiàn)精神 the spirit of dedication
自信 self-confidence
誠(chéng)實(shí) honesty n./ honest adj.
謙虛 modesty n./ modest adj.
奮斗 strive v.
團(tuán)隊(duì)精神 & 合作 teamwork spirit & cooperation 競(jìng)爭(zhēng) competition n.
社會(huì)公德 public morality
責(zé)任 responsibility
內(nèi)心美 inner beauty
和諧社會(huì) harmonious society