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aliyxiang

My View about Online Shopping
            The above cartoon describes  that a man pulls the egnoumous shopping car standing on computer. How deep things!
             This drawing let me

魚尼瑪

瘦呼呼

A customer pulling a gigantic and absolutely empty shopping  cart stands on the computer. It seems that he wants to buy plenty of things on the Internet. Under the picture there are some eye-catching words reading: you can get everything you need with the Internet. This caption summarizes the profound message of this cartoon.
This picture reflects customer's dependence on the shopping at network. As the development of the Internet and the gradual perfection of the physical distribution systerm, shopping on the website becomes more and more popular, especially to people whose job is very heavy and to students in unversity. Therefore, the impact of shopping online is too important to ignore. A shopping website, Tianmao, earns 1 billion  RMB only in three minutes on the single day, which shows the effect of shopping online.
People should consider this phenomenon seriously. Although shopping on the Internet faciliate our life, it cannot give us the good or bad  experience we can get in reality. This means that some merchant may decieve us, making the shopping bothersome. So the government should take useful and reasonal measures to make the shopping online more safe and satisfactory.

龍呼晴

A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent  that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

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龍呼晴

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monicalixiaoya

We have entered an age of online shopping literally.As illustrated vividly in the picture,a man is attempting to walking into the screen of his computer,with an empty shopping cart in hand,which implies his intention of purchasing a lot on the Internet.At the bottom of this picture,a slogan underlines this fact,saying"you can get whatever you want with the Internet".
This picture reveals the prevalence of online shopping,which can be proved by the recent extensive transactions on Taobao. Two factors mainly account for this phenomenon.For one thing,with improved living standards,people have had a stronger power of consumption,which requires a diversity of commodities in turn.For another,shopping websites managed to make it a reality that different items,such as household appliances and garments,can be selected at the same time.It is these websites' capability to transform shopping into a convenient and efficient activity that brings them success.
In my opinion,online shopping do accelerate this high-paced society functioning to some extent.However,we should notice its drawbacks as well.For example,there are considerable deceits among online trading.To address such problem,the government should fashion the laws and regulations so that they can be applied to new situation.What's more,the traders,including both the sellers and the buyers,are supposed to stick to the principle of honesty.Only if we develop the online shopping reasonably can we make the best use of it.

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