Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today know more about the world events than their parents did before. Include details and examples in your explanation.
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@北京-在職-11、19Personally speaking, I think young people today know more about the world events than their parents did before, because a lot of advanced technologies or media bring us more convenience today. Well you know, in the past, if our parents wanted to get information, they would read newspaper or chat to（chat后接賓語，一般加to或with） their neighbors. However, today we can use a lot of procedures（？sorry，沒聽清楚） among media to get information in no time, such as mobile phone, TV and computer. So in this way, we can get information about world events more efficiently and accurately.
綜合講評：
Delivery：語音語調都比較不錯，但是需要注意個別長句的斷句，注意說話時的氣息交換，可以讓語言表達更加自然。
Language use：雖然整體上單詞與語法沒有大錯誤，也不會因此而影響整體印象，但是細節不容忽視。語言比較樸實，但是能夠有效表達自己的想法，不過可以考慮積累些實用表達，豐富自己的語言。
Topic development：內容展開豐富，邏輯也很清晰，你的口語應該沒有大問題，加油！
@北京高三11.12Personally speaking, I definitely believe nowadays young people know more world events than their parents did before, because nowadays there are various ways for us to get information, such as the Internet, the social media and the TV programs. However, in the past, our parents can only get news from the traditional newspapers. I’d like to read news from the social media, such as the Wechat public account, and the Facebook. I can select the particular topic I am interested into and to（刪） get some information from them. However, my parents can only know some of their interests by reading the newspaper. It is waste of the time.
綜合講評：
Delivery：語音問題不大，但語調過于平淡，豐富的語調變化可以調動聽眾的注意。
Language use：語法整體上很不錯，明顯錯誤不多。但是注意定冠詞the的使用，文中很多情況其實并不需要使用定冠詞的。
Topic development：內容上對兩種立場的反復比較容易讓人忘掉重點，尤其是最后不是強調自己的觀點，又去說父母時代的不便。并且說到waste of the time時，這樣的表達語氣有些重。
參考范文
As far as I am concerned, young people now have a much broader world view than their parents did. First, considering the advent of communication technology, we can now learn the world events at one click of a button on our computers or cellphones. The information provided on line is up-to-date, easy to access and widely available to the public. This kind of technology was simply unavailable thirty years ago. Secondly, education nowadays is more focused on international events, rather than domestic issues. As globalization spreads around the world, youngsters have broader visions on matters beyond their national boundaries than their parents would have before. That’s why I think the younger generations have a much broader understanding of events than their parents did.