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標題: 考研寫作：“網購”熱點話題你來寫，我來評！ [打印本頁]
作者: 考研論壇    時間: 2014-11-11 11:04
標題: 考研寫作：“網購”熱點話題你來寫，我來評！
      感謝研研們的熱情參與，本次點評活動已經結束，恭喜幸運樓層的小伙伴們，老師的點評結果已經回復給你們了哦！沒有搶到樓層的伙伴們，不要灰心，還有好多活動等你參加哦~




　　11.11，又掀起一股網購熱潮
　　研研們，這么“熱”的現象，極大可能是今年命題方向哦
　　我們再來一發“考研作文你來寫，我來評”活動如何？
　　“網購”熱點話題寫作搶先練、學習+活動兩不誤！

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　【活動時間】
　　2014年11月11日11:00--11月13日23:00
　　【參加活動方法】
　　Step1：在活動時間內完成命題作文
　　　　作文題目見下文附件。（關于網購噠`````
　　Step2：在本貼內回復，附上作文內容（圖片亦可）
　　提示：如果是拍照上傳作文，圖片要高清無碼哦~，
　　Step3：幸運樓層點評
　　此次活動，我們會抽取11的倍數的樓層如：11,22,33,····的作文進行打分、點評，多攢人品哦！
　　提示：請勿灌水，拒絕水貼和無意義貼，每人最多回帖三次~

　　【活動福利】
　　1、幸運樓層的作文老師會嚴格按照考研閱卷要求進行打分、點評！
　　2、活動結束后，會附上非常in的“網購”作文干貨，持續關注吧！

　　【活動注意事項】
　　1、請在規定時間內完成，
　　2、請在本帖回復，幸運樓層為11的倍數（包括11）。
　　3、拍照上傳務必高清無碼
　　沒有按照活動要求的童鞋們，不予打分點評！

　　【點評老師】：
　　方會巖（ID：方會巖）----
　　全國考研英語優秀輔導老師，教學經驗豐富，突出應試技巧，直擊命題。
　　授課思路清晰，條理分明，大氣、風趣、讓學員在愉悅的環境里學習，提高成績。
　　主講詞匯、完型、翻譯及寫作。

　　附：作文題目  （ 作文活動系列二.doc (148 KB, 下載次數: 111) ）
　　[英語一]：

    “一網在手，應有盡有”
   Directions:
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture above. In your essay, you should
1) describe the picture briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

[英語二]：網購交易占社會消費零售總額的比率


Directions: Write an essay based on the graph above. In your writing you should　　1) describe the graph ,and　　2) give your comments　　You should write at least 150 words. (15 points)
好啦，上面是活動的內容和要求，大家踴躍參加哇！
對于作文復習大家還有什么問題的話可以來聽聽方老師的寫作免費直播課：點擊直達

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作者: 汲取當下的力量    時間: 2014-11-11 12:01
竟然還有沙發
作者: kingmotto    時間: 2014-11-11 12:06
贊
作者: 孫景亮    時間: 2014-11-11 12:11
有可能考嗎
作者: 小黃瓜2014    時間: 2014-11-11 12:14
可以先練一發，多準備總比不準備強O:-)
作者: 沉默來考研    時間: 2014-11-11 12:49
積極參加。感謝考研網。
作者: 18911308357    時間: 2014-11-11 13:09
想要
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 13:27
沒有人寫
作者: consequent    時間: 2014-11-11 13:29
好叼
作者: h1823355705    時間: 2014-11-11 13:39
有沒有范文呀
作者: aliyxiang    時間: 2014-11-11 13:42
My View about Online Shopping
            The above cartoon describes  that a man pulls the egnoumous shopping car standing on computer. How deep things!
             This drawing let me
作者: aliyxiang    時間: 2014-11-11 13:44
aliyxiang 發表于 2014-11-11 13:42
My View about Online Shopping
            The above cartoon describes  that a man pulls the egnoumou ...

enormous,tremendous
作者: Pandora1023    時間: 2014-11-11 13:52
mark
作者: 魚尼瑪    時間: 2014-11-11 13:54
14
作者: 奮斗1207    時間: 2014-11-11 14:12
mark一下，一會來寫~
作者: 屠玉熊    時間: 2014-11-11 14:14
堆樓，幫人
作者: 屠玉熊    時間: 2014-11-11 14:14
堆樓
作者: 屠玉熊    時間: 2014-11-11 14:14
堆樓
作者: 呦呦威    時間: 2014-11-11 14:17
mark
作者: 魚尼瑪    時間: 2014-11-11 14:17
我的
作者: 魚尼瑪    時間: 2014-11-11 14:18
寫了半個小時
作者: 魚尼瑪    時間: 2014-11-11 14:18

作者: 劉劉LIU    時間: 2014-11-11 14:20
孫景亮 發表于 2014-11-11 12:11
有可能考嗎

親，考研黨過個節而已
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:21
本來要搶11樓，現在22也沒了
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:23
小伙伴們刷起來啊
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:24
自己給自己堆~
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:25
再來一層
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:26
好吧……不無聊了。
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:28
怎么沒有其他人
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:29
還差3樓
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:29
2樓~
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:29
1樓。也夠無聊的
作者: 瘦呼呼    時間: 2014-11-11 14:29
A customer pulling a gigantic and absolutely empty shopping  cart stands on the computer. It seems that he wants to buy plenty of things on the Internet. Under the picture there are some eye-catching words reading: you can get everything you need with the Internet. This caption summarizes the profound message of this cartoon.
This picture reflects customer's dependence on the shopping at network. As the development of the Internet and the gradual perfection of the physical distribution systerm, shopping on the website becomes more and more popular, especially to people whose job is very heavy and to students in unversity. Therefore, the impact of shopping online is too important to ignore. A shopping website, Tianmao, earns 1 billion  RMB only in three minutes on the single day, which shows the effect of shopping online.
People should consider this phenomenon seriously. Although shopping on the Internet faciliate our life, it cannot give us the good or bad  experience we can get in reality. This means that some merchant may decieve us, making the shopping bothersome. So the government should take useful and reasonal measures to make the shopping online more safe and satisfactory.
作者: wnan10    時間: 2014-11-11 14:30
這個話題去年陜師大英語學科教學的908考的就是關于雙十一，網購現象
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:40
A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent  that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.
   我先占一樓，44再占一樓，嘻
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:41
A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent  that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:41
A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent  that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:41
為什么發不了？
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:43
A person is thrillingly pushing an empty trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who seems comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent  that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:43
依然發不了，這是怎么回事？
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:44
難道只有44樓才能發作文？
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:44
算我無聊試一下，原諒我吧
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:44
42
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:45
A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent  that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:45
不要啊，都占44樓了，怎么還木有？
作者: tingtingwu    時間: 2014-11-11 14:46
aliyxiang 發表于 2014-11-11 13:44
enormous,tremendous

不是站在電腦上。是往它里走類
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:51
A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:51
好吧，算是真的發不了了
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 14:52
龍呼晴 發表于 2014-11-11 14:51
好吧，算是真的發不了了

誰能告訴我消失的樓層是怎么回事？
作者: 奮斗1207    時間: 2014-11-11 15:02
50
作者: 點火櫻桃    時間: 2014-11-11 15:02
龍呼晴 發表于 2014-11-11 14:45
不要啊，都占44樓了，怎么還木有？

怎么了？上面不是有人發出來了嗎？
作者: 奮斗1207    時間: 2014-11-11 15:03
不要怪我，我真的很想讓老師評論
作者: liudabaobei    時間: 2014-11-11 15:03
龍呼晴 發表于 2014-11-11 14:52
誰能告訴我消失的樓層是怎么回事？

怎么沒有44
作者: 奮斗1207    時間: 2014-11-11 15:04

作者: 奮斗1207    時間: 2014-11-11 15:04

作者: 奮斗1207    時間: 2014-11-11 15:07
老師不好意思，55樓那個可能不太清晰，我重新拍了一張。
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:11
liudabaobei 發表于 2014-11-11 15:03
怎么沒有44

被我不知道占到哪里去了？消失的樓層！
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:14
這次不知道行不行，先試下，我是有多。。。。。。

作者: liudabaobei    時間: 2014-11-11 15:14
龍呼晴 發表于 2014-11-11 15:11
被我不知道占到哪里去了？消失的樓層！

其他貼子有這種情況嗎？
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:15
liudabaobei 發表于 2014-11-11 15:14
其他貼子有這種情況嗎？

非作文的帖子發的出去，你看我那么多廢話全出來了
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:16
liudabaobei 發表于 2014-11-11 15:14
其他貼子有這種情況嗎？

不知道66樓占不占得到
作者: 愛琴的考研    時間: 2014-11-11 15:17
搶
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:17
取難太字名 發表于 2014-11-11 15:17
看不清，最好自己再加個電子的

你也太貼心了吧，哈哈
作者: 孫景亮    時間: 2014-11-11 15:17
劉劉LIU 發表于 2014-11-11 14:20
親，考研黨過個節而已

喲西。
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:18


作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:22
龍呼晴 發表于 2014-11-11 15:18

吆西，占樓成功，不知道這樣算不算犯規啊。附上個電子版吧。
A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who seems comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that  department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:23
龍呼晴 發表于 2014-11-11 15:18

好吧，奇了怪了，本想附個電子版，居然不行，方老師受累看手寫版吧，我盡力寫得好看了
作者: 考研論壇    時間: 2014-11-11 15:27
龍呼晴 發表于 2014-11-11 14:45
不要啊，都占44樓了，怎么還木有？

我們正在解決這個問題，謝謝你的關注！{:1_181:}
作者: 龍呼晴    時間: 2014-11-11 15:28
考研論壇 發表于 2014-11-11 15:27
我們正在解決這個問題，謝謝你的關注！

嘻
作者: 劉劉LIU    時間: 2014-11-11 15:29
看了大家的作文，我的拿不出手了
作者: 178648003    時間: 2014-11-11 15:43
剁手v
作者: 石頭hah    時間: 2014-11-11 16:04
Zichoujianxiao

作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:12
大家都寫得好塊啊
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:12
正在努力。。。
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:13


作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:13

作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:14
奮斗的斑鳩 發表于 2014-11-11 16:13



作者: 咚咚咚咚92    時間: 2014-11-11 16:16
不會寫作文。。誰能教教我
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:17
咚咚咚咚92 發表于 2014-11-11 16:16
不會寫作文。。誰能教教我

看著何凱文教的一步一步寫。。
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:19
奮斗的斑鳩 發表于 2014-11-11 16:13

老師這張沒照好，可以看76或者798樓的
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:20
奮斗的斑鳩 發表于 2014-11-11 16:19
老師這張沒照好，可以看76或者798樓的

是78樓的
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:20
期待。。
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:20
搶樓層真難
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:20
太不容易了
作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:21

作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:22


作者: 奮斗的斑鳩    時間: 2014-11-11 16:22


作者: 點火櫻桃    時間: 2014-11-11 16:29
好憂桑，要等到99樓啊。。。手機端不能傳圖片太坑了。。。
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:30
刷刷
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:30
再刷
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:30
=_=水一水，占樓層
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:30
99好遙遠…
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:30
再刷刷……
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:31
一二三……
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:31
四五六……
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:31
七八九…
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:31
不遠啦…
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:31
We have entered an age of online shopping literally.As illustrated vividly in the picture,a man is attempting to walking into the screen of his computer,with an empty shopping cart in hand,which implies his intention of purchasing a lot on the Internet.At the bottom of this picture,a slogan underlines this fact,saying"you can get whatever you want with the Internet".
This picture reveals the prevalence of online shopping,which can be proved by the recent extensive transactions on Taobao. Two factors mainly account for this phenomenon.For one thing,with improved living standards,people have had a stronger power of consumption,which requires a diversity of commodities in turn.For another,shopping websites managed to make it a reality that different items,such as household appliances and garments,can be selected at the same time.It is these websites' capability to transform shopping into a convenient and efficient activity that brings them success.
In my opinion,online shopping do accelerate this high-paced society functioning to some extent.However,we should notice its drawbacks as well.For example,there are considerable deceits among online trading.To address such problem,the government should fashion the laws and regulations so that they can be applied to new situation.What's more,the traders,including both the sellers and the buyers,are supposed to stick to the principle of honesty.Only if we develop the online shopping reasonably can we make the best use of it.
作者: 點火櫻桃    時間: 2014-11-11 16:33
點火櫻桃 發表于 2014-11-11 16:29
好憂桑，要等到99樓啊。。。手機端不能傳圖片太坑了。。。

已哭瞎=_=
作者: monicalixiaoya    時間: 2014-11-11 16:33
點火櫻桃 發表于 2014-11-11 16:33
已哭瞎=_=

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