昨天寫(xiě)的關(guān)于政治萬(wàn)能解題思路，僅僅是一天的時(shí)間就受到了很好的評(píng)價(jià)，在這里謝謝大家的支持。 政治萬(wàn)能解題思路 文筆不好，沒(méi)什么華麗辭藻，但是哥很注重實(shí)用性，請(qǐng)務(wù)必耐心看完。
那么，我今天接著來(lái)談?wù)動(dòng)⒄Z(yǔ)大作文怎么去寫(xiě)。
其實(shí)大作文無(wú)非就是考察三段式。第一段，就是考察我們描述事件的能力，第二段是關(guān)于事件的分析能力，第三段也無(wú)非就是對(duì)事件的看法或者評(píng)價(jià)又或者是解決方法。其實(shí)這三段內(nèi)容就是我們以后入研究生之后，需要用到的一種能力。以后看專業(yè)學(xué)術(shù)書(shū)，又或者寫(xiě)論文時(shí)能用上。
進(jìn)接著話題，我們第一段，就是描寫(xiě)圖片怎么寫(xiě)？不要想太多，你想太多反而無(wú)從入手，就按部就班，圖上什么樣，你就簡(jiǎn)單的描述。你想得太復(fù)雜，反而寫(xiě)不出來(lái)。這里點(diǎn)播一下大家，我們要背的不是作文的整個(gè)模版或者整篇文章，因?yàn)槟羌炔豢赡芤矝](méi)必要，背的是自己認(rèn)為好用的句子，這種句子就是要用很強(qiáng)的兼容性，放之四海而皆準(zhǔn)的。然后背多了，寫(xiě)作文時(shí)就一定要給我想辦法用上去。作文不是為了寫(xiě)作文去寫(xiě)的......，而是為了我們以前背過(guò)的句子，想辦法在文章中把他很好地使用出來(lái)，想辦法把他套上去。并不是我們?yōu)榱苏撟C一個(gè)東西，去編一個(gè)什么句子，而是用我們以前背過(guò)的大量句子去組織，說(shuō)得簡(jiǎn)單點(diǎn)，你寫(xiě)這句話的目的，就是因?yàn)槟阋郧氨尺^(guò)，你就是要寫(xiě)這句話，所以你才套上去的...明白了嗎？大量的事實(shí)證明，你只要背過(guò)很多兼容性的句子，到時(shí)候順手一堆句子。
開(kāi)頭很簡(jiǎn)單，基本就是As is vividly depicted in the picture....there stand a ....,a ...one,...ing...it is not difficult to deduce that the cartoonist intends to show us a(n) .... message/emerging problem that...however,this phenomenon or problem has stirred a heated discussion among the people all over nation.或者,this phemomenon has caused wide public concern.就這么套，圖片簡(jiǎn)單描述，圖片簡(jiǎn)單說(shuō)明，馬上要說(shuō)明這個(gè)圖片反映的是什么現(xiàn)象和趨勢(shì)，一定是現(xiàn)象，問(wèn)題或者趨勢(shì)，不可能很狹隘，就圖片而圖片。
中段就是說(shuō)明問(wèn)題，中段寫(xiě)的方式有很多，基本上可以分為三個(gè)層次，特別注意論據(jù)，英文寫(xiě)作論據(jù)并不要求很好的證明觀點(diǎn)，本質(zhì)是看你句子表達(dá)能力，已經(jīng)三層式的結(jié)構(gòu)組織。你只要從三個(gè)不同方面來(lái)組織，用出要的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，就是高分，不用去管三個(gè)論據(jù)有沒(méi)有邏輯關(guān)系，或者遞進(jìn)，并列，根本不用去考慮，關(guān)鍵是每個(gè)層次里面是否有符合句子。
千萬(wàn)別用first,second,third，這種傻忽忽的詞，給大家一個(gè)規(guī)范用詞
first of all/to begin with/above all
in the second place/in the second instance
last but not least/in summary
注意論據(jù)三點(diǎn)有時(shí)一下子想不出來(lái)，你就可以舉例，可以說(shuō)some expert pionts out that.../take ... in instance.../according to the investigation conducted this year indicates that.../some statistics expose that...
最后結(jié)論
In a word,we can safely draw the conclusion that....
下面是我自己整理歸納的句子，有很大的兼容性，你只要背熟，自己選自己說(shuō)著順口的，不一定全要背出來(lái)，到考試的時(shí)候，為了展示這些句子，就寫(xiě)出來(lái)，寫(xiě)作文的容易一定是我們背過(guò)的句子把大展示出來(lái)，不是讓你就作文寫(xiě)作文，一再?gòu)?qiáng)調(diào)！
1.as far as ... be concerned [就...而言]
2.has/have unpleasant association with sth.[對(duì)...沒(méi)好感]
3.an increasingly number of...[越來(lái)越多的...]
4.point out...[指出]
5.contribute (directly) to sth...[（直接）有助于...]
6.proper measures should be taken to/great efforts should be made to[應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧?當(dāng)努力去做]
7.be questioned by...[受到質(zhì)疑]
8.no one can deny the fact that...[不可否認(rèn)]
9.a recent investigation indicated that...[最近一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明]
10.tend to have favourable attitude towards sth...[受到歡迎]
11.turn a blind eye to/turn a deaf ear to[視而不見(jiàn)/聰而不聞]
12.pay a heavy price to do sth.[為做某事付出巨大代價(jià)]
13.the most significant aspect of sth.[最重要的是]
14.make it possible for sb to do[使某人做某事成為可能]
15.be obliged to admit the fact that[不得不承認(rèn)]
16.spare no effort to do[不歇余力做某事]
17.the information I`ve collected for many years lead me to believe that...[從我這些年所收集的信息使我相信]
18.pose a tremendous threat to sth.[給 ...造成巨大威脅]
19.produce a far-reaching influence on sth.[對(duì)...產(chǎn)生巨大影響]
20.live under illusion/down to the earth[生活在幻想中/腳踏實(shí)地或面對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)]
原創(chuàng)內(nèi)容，歡迎互相學(xué)習(xí)，進(jìn)步！恕我淺薄，如過(guò)錯(cuò)誤歡迎指正。
2010：
From the picture above,we can see a spical "hotpot" ,which contains many unique ingredients,stand for "LAO SHE","KONG FU","Decompostion" and some things to that effect.At the bottom of the picture,a sentence stands there extremely prominent,which can be brielf interpreted by this way:culture "hotpot" is not only good tasting but also strongly good for one`s health. A bit exggerating picture is,however,through careful observation,we may discover that behind this strange senario,what the cartoonist intends to show us is extremely obvious:the significance of integration between Chinese culture and other countries` culture.
With the implementation of the China`s reform and opening up,an emerging tendency is that more and more foriegners are getting fascinated with our Chinese culture.They come to China to learn Chinese language,taste delicious Chinese foods,make friends with Chinese people, and etc.All these make them pretty comfortable and agreeable.At the same time,however,this phenomenon also stirred a heated dated in our society,so,how to render the other countries` culture be more compatible with our Chinese culture has caused wide public concern.
As far as I am concerned,before giving my opinion I think we should take closely look at the culture`s function widely.Policymakers should be more aware of that culture integration not only benefits to our making a further development but exerts a great contribution to the world peace.
2009：
As is vigorously shown in the photo,we can see some people sitting in front of their disks and being absorbing in controlling their computers.The expressions in their faces look pretty agreaable.However what the picture intrigue me is that they were separated from each other by a spider web,which is the metahpor of the internet web.At the bottom of the picture,a sentence stands there prominent,which can be briefly interpreted by this way:internet contributes to both connecting and isolating each other.A bit exaggerating the picture is,but from observation seriously,we may find that what the cartoonist intends to show us is extremely obvious:the correct attitude towards the using of internet.
With the science and technology development,more and more people,espically youngsters are using internet now.With the internet,they will not bother to go to the laboray,when they want to search for some specific references.All the things entail them to do is sitting in front of the computer,and clicking the mouse.The information ranged from social science to the medicial science are all avaliable on the internet.They could also use some unique voice functions to contact with friends promptly.Thanks to the internet.it is the internet has changed our life style pattern.We are obliged to admit the fact that internet has made itself increasingly become the indispensable ingredience of our daily life.It do much convenience to us.However,some people now are worry about the inproper using of the internet,which may generate tremendously side effects.For one thing,using excessively internet in front of the table with less body motion will strongly do harm to health.For the another,using internet desparately will hamper our face-to-face comnunication.People sooner or later will find they were alienated from each other gradually.
To my opinion,owning to it has got both positive and side effects,I think we should upright our attitude towards the using of internet first.The internet no more than a servant to our life.we should be the host of ourself rather than being the slaver of the internet.
2008:
In the cartoon above,two men combined with each other catch my eye intriguingly.Both of them lacked a leg,however they were running repidly and left their sticks behind. At the bottom of the picture,two sentences stand there prominent,which can be briefly interpreted by this way:"both of us got one leg,nevertheless,we can integrate into an organiztion,so that we can go everwhere we want."A bit instructive the picture is.It is not difficult to deduce that what the cartoonist intends to show us is the interdependence among the people.
It goes without saying that each person has got his own fault.However the way,which people treat with their own shortcoming vary from person to person.Some people show over passionate attitudes towards their fault.Unfortunately,this uncorrect attitudes will strongly exert negative influences on their behaviors and feelings.They will be pessimistic about everything they encounter,and can not withstand the pressure imposed on them,even put an end to their life.While,other people often show gratitude to everything and accept the fact that they are not perfect.They reckon that although they have got their own shortcoming,they can come to resort to their friends for help and supplement with each other,then everything will be much easier.From this,shortcoming can transfor into advantage.Just as the saying gose:"many hands make light thing."
In my opinion,I think we should put ourselves down to the earth and do not complain about what we were suffered.The crucial point is what can we do to make up for our shortcoming and make our life smooth in the unpleasant situation.One of best way to overcome our shortcoming is that people come together and combine with each other,just like what cartoonist want to convey us. 2007:
The saying,"Being confidence of oneself will exert extremely benign influences on one`s final success",which is widely shared by many people.In the picture above,however,a goalkeeper and a football player has done a bad example for us.As is the picture distinctly shown that both of them strongly overestimated their opponent,at the same time,they do personally believe that in the presence of such a robust opponent,they seem to become extremely small and never can they combat the opponent,who are just in front of them.A bit exaggerating the picture is,but an instructive one.It is a not tough task for us to deduce that the message,which the cartoonist intends to convey us is the magnitude of the confidence.
I boldly guess that many people have got a same experience that we always incline to overestimate the difficulty we encountered.However,some social experts suggest that,the attitude we treated with the difficulty will exert considerable influences on our behaviors.An investigation conducted by this year dramatically exposes that people with passionate attitudes towards the difficulty seem to be lost in the end.While people who are full confidence in themselves always achieve the final success.This finding has stirred a heated debate among the people.So how to deal with the difficulty with the correct attitude?
As far as I am conserned,I reckon the crucial point is that we should upright our attitude towards the difficulty and be more confidence in ourselves,then confront it with all our passion and brightness.We should brand this instructive experience in our mind,difficulty is not as strong as what it surposed to be. 2006:
At the first glance,I am strongly intrigued by these two men above the pictuce,how fashion they are.However,on careful observation,I changed my mind.A man in the left picture had a name,which is the famous football star`s name--Beckham, written on his face.While in right piture,I am extremely starled by the man who had spent 300 RMB on the haircut,merely attempt to make his hair like the Backham`s style.I do not know whether to laugh or to cry.A bit exaggerating the picture is,nevertheless,behind the strange senario the message which the cartoonist intends to show us is distinctly obvious:don`t follow the trend blindly.
Nowadays,many young people incline to be influenced by some successful man who had achieved big triumphes.These people are in all filds arranged from moive star to businessman.Some youngsters are under the impression that as long as they follow by these men`s behaviors or appearances,they will achieve the goal,too.Nevertheless,some expert studyed in socail phenomenon suggest that this superficial outlook will have a dramatically vicious bearing on youngsters.For one thing,they improperly take their cue from these successful men without paying any considerable attention to their study may lead them to be legged.For the another,some of them just see the splendid appearances these successful men presented in front of the public and have little idea about what they had suffered and experienced behind the scene.Fortunately,this emerging tendency has caused wide public concern.
For my part.I strongly reckon we should penetrate the phenomenon to learn the thing`s truth and do not dwell on such a superficial outlook.We should correct our attitude towards the goal what we want to achieve.These successful man who had substantial experiences can be our incentive to acomplish the final success.Then we can transfor potential into practice and bring dream into the reality. 2005:
In the above picture,we can see an old man shranking like a ball and people round him are all his own children,however none of them is preparing for assuming the responsibility for treating their elder father well.Each of them are posing a defending posture and about to kick his father from his part.Treating our elder parents well is one of the excellent virtues in China and this virtue had been shared by many people for thousands of years.Unfortunately,I feel bitterly disappionted to see such a pity senario.These four children had done a bad example for us and it is not a tough task for us to deduce that what the cartoonist intends to convey us is distinctly obivious:we are under the obligation to take care of our elder parents.
Nowadays,with the implementation of the China`s reform and opening up,our material circumstances has been enormously enhanced,in the meantime,some people has lost many benign virtues.People become indifferent to other people,even to their elder parents.They are under that impression that they should get rid of the responsibility for looking after their parents and just do well to themselves.Some of them even consider their parents as an obstacle which may in turn hamper their hot persuiting of comfortable life.Some experts,however,suggest that this wrong attitude towards elder parents will have a vicious bearing on both their parents and themselves.For one thing,when we are young,parents show their all love to us and provide us a splendid environment as possible as they can.Nevertheless,their own situation will get bad,owning to their grown children do not intend to take care of them.For another,these people who do not want t**sponsibility do a bad example for their own children.As the expectation,their children will treat them accordingly.
In my pinion,I strongly condemn the behavior,which these people in the picture above presented us.We should refect on the relationship between parents and ourselves.They should not be seen as a burden imposed on us and taking care of them is our obligation which can be not shirked.Furthermore,I reckon that some government department concerned should formulate some regulation promptly,any people who shirk the responsibility will be strictly punished. 2004:
In the above picture a yong man who participated in running race has reached his destination.On careful observation we can see two direction signs on the road,one followed by another promptly,stands for repectively the ending and the begining.At the bottom of the picture,a sentence stands there prominent,which can be briefly interpreted by this way:destination is just a new beginning.Furthermore we can see the expression in the young man`s face looks pretty happy.A tremendously instructive the piture is and it is not difficult to deduce that what the cartoonist intends to convey us is extremely obvious:correct the attitude towards the relation bewteen the ending and the beginning.
Nowadays,there is an emerging tendency is that many people always show impatience when they achieved their goal.Many of them even are under the impression that as long as they achieve the goal which they are fascinated with, they could boast about it once for all.Some experts studyed in social phenomenon,however,suggested that these people failed to cope with the relationship bewteen the ending and the beginning well.Unfortunately,this uncorrect attitude will exert a dramatically vicious bearing on our behavior which may in turn hamper our achieving a further goal.While,peole who take the ending as a new beginning seem to always achieve the final goal.
In my opinion,I reckon that we should correct attitude towards the relationship between the ending and the beginning first.We should consider the ending as a brand-new beginning and always set a new goal then pursuit it.From this we can make continuous progresses. 2003:
From the pictures above,we can see two basins of flowers,which are in the different situations.One is protected by a shelter and the flower is blossoming splendid against the raining background.While,another,which is left the shelter,is extremely fading in the rain.On careful observation,we can also see a sentence stands there prominent,which can be briefly interpreted by this way:Never can flowers in the greenhouse survive in the wind and rain.A bit exaggerating the picture is,but an instructive one.It is a not tough task for us to deduce from the strange scenario that what the cartoonist intends to convey us is distinctly obvious:parents who over-spoil their children will exert vicious effects on them.
With the implementation of one-child policy,parents are getting more and more treasure their chidren.However,the way which parents show love to their children vary from person to person.Some parents prepare every thing for their children,some even instead of their children and make desision for them.They provide an extremely benign environment for their children and fear to see any injures may happen upon thier children.Nevertheless some experts investgated in social phenomenon pionted out:these parents seemed to pretty love their children,however,the way these parents treated their children will have a negative bearing on their children`s future life.Actually,children are deprive of their own right to do every thing in their own accord.It will hamper children`s innovation and the ability of competition in the long run.
To my opinion,I think,for one thing,parents should not put the cart before the horse and be more confidence in their children,leave to their own devices for them to do their own things.For another,it is extremely advisable for children to put themselves under to the earth and accumulate more experiences related to the future life.They should accept the fact that sooner or later their parents will leave them for a independent life. 2002:
In the pictuce above,we can see a pretty American gril wearing in traditional Chinese costume.From her smile expression in the face,we can safely deduce that she is strongly fond of this traditional Chinese costume,which is the metaphor of the Chinese culture.On careful observation,it is not difficult for us to infer that what the cartoonist intends to convey us is extremely obvious:culture from different countries can be integrated well.
With the implementation of the China`s opening up and reform policy,More and more foreigners come to China.They are getting increasingly become interested in our unique culture.They learn Chinese language,taste Chinese food,make friends with Chinese people and some things to that effect.All these make them pretty comfortable and agreeable.Recently,however,a heated debate was stirred among the Chinese people,they argue that how to cope with the culture from the different countries?Some people believe that the foreign cultures can not be compatible will with our culture,they in turn may hamper our own culture`s making further development.So they should be limited.While other people reckon that culture from different countries can supplement to each other and make a joint progress.So they should be encouraged.
In my oppinion I strongly agree with the later party`s statement.Culture from different countries should supplement to each other rather than conflicting and we should take closely look at the cultures` funtcion widely.Coping with them properly will not only benefit to our making further development but also exert contribution to the world peace. 2001:
From the Picture above,we can see an oil lamp lighting against the dark background and the lamp is designed to be a smile face.At top of the picture, a sentence stands there strongly intrigue me,which can be briefly intrepeted by this way:Love is the lamp of light.The more darker the background is,the more brightness the lamp will show.It is not difficult for us to infer that what the cartoonist intends to convey us is extremely obvious:love can warm people`s heart.
With the implementation of the China`s reform and opening up,our material circumstances have enormously enhanced.However,some benign virtures which were shared by people for thousand of years are not forgotten.Such as helping people who are in the vicious situation,endow money to the childrens who can not go to school just owing to lacking of tuition and some things to that effect.It is widely accepted by many people that although they are not acquainted at all,they can help with each other.They reckon that even a small contribution will inspire people in the bad situation to cheer up.Now our country is preparing for establishing the harmonious socity which entails people take the initiative in contributing to the society.From this,the final goal is in the not distance future.
For my opinion,the socity which people treated with each other friendly and do a favor for one in the vicious situation will be a good place to live.We should prepare for extending our hand to people who are in need and we should believe if we are in the same scenario,they will do accordingly, 作者: 曼藍(lán) 時(shí)間: 2010-12-23 16:46
嗯，積累些好的短語(yǔ)比背那些模板句子好作者: 鉸接巴士 時(shí)間: 2010-12-23 17:20
